My writing..
So I’v tried to write some stories manny times..I am writing in english and this is a first time I am giving it on Interenet. So try to reed this part, it is not finished..not at all. But I’d love to know your opinion about it, becous I’ll might continue writing it..
The sun rose over hills in the bloody blanket of clouds. Light like fire spread through the countryside. It was a first morning of the new untouched world. Hills and mountains were towering high and strong over flatted plains and fields of the lows. Water running freely through newly created corridors. Fresh grass, young but high and tough trees all was grown in a second.
It is a view as any other in whole universe (but not the one we are part of). So this nice young untouched unspoiled world appeared and as a baby it started to brief. The soft breeze runs through the branches of the trees. It shakes the leaves and makes them sing the song of wildness and life. The flowers blossomed under the touch of the sunlight. Nice blue, white, red, pink, blossoms colored the fields. But there was something missing here. All that beauty, but there was nobody to look at it. So this world’s spirit thought about some creature to walk this world. And the Spirit decided to sacrifice it self to give a life to the intelligent creatures, witch would take care of this world.
So the roots of the highest mountain shake and the little part have rise from the slope. Than it formed and started to bow and curve. From the top two big and heavy limbs started to spread. Monster on four like pillars legs with fat bally and wide shoulders appeared. And from it’s bag the had of stone face raised. He was Hill, master of highs mountains hills and all ground beneath them. He was the first. And he knew it. It was his responsibility to help the others to rise. So his grate lidless eyes peered around. He briefed in and tasted the air. It was without any taste or smell. Then he bowed backwards witch made a lot of cracking and crashing of his stoned body. And he howled to the sky. The sound was deep and full. Suddenly he stopped and kneeled on both his right legs, and whispered.
The wind came from the clouds full of water and freezing snow. It hit the ground exploded and then imploded to the twister from with the Wind was born. Still shivering body formed from dust and air with water. And he was levitating low above the ground. Hill stands up and looked at him. “Welcome brother.” Said his motionless voice.
“Hill.” Answers Wind with respect looking to the ground.
“We got a lot of work ahead. So do not stand here like that. You can give the life to your own animals. Create them to your image. Now go and take care about weather and wind of this world. I make you a god!” Then he waved him out. So Wind flow out.
Hill walked down the mountain to the flatted plain where he stopped, and kneeled again. Then he grabbed the surface and ripped the higher layer of the ground. He throw that out. Hit the naked sand by his lamps and screamed. Earth shake and a big colon of mud flow up. And there was The Nature. Thin high long legged she was. Her body was like a nature itself. Legs were long, muscles covert by thigh skin. Belly covered by soft hair witch was grooving on her bags to. Her nicely formed breaths were like two blossoms, colored soft and smelled of thousands flowers. And the face. She got a face of all nature, indescribably beautiful. Big long hair was moving on hers head. It was changing itself. And her eyes were wild and full of fire. She bound before him and whispered. “My lord Hill I am here at your service.” He told her as he told Wind but about natural things that live and move. She turned and rise her long perfect hands. And she started to create a wild life of this planet. Hill smiled a little and gazed a way from her over the plain. And there he found a Lake.
He run across the fields and finally stands on the border of it. He howled as he howled for Wind. And with a big splash the Water rose from the bottom of the lake. She flowed to the shore and stopped in front of Hill with a little bow. Her body was still moving. Mud and clear water was mixing in it with little glimpses. He waited for her to greet him. But she stands silent. “Kneel and thank me for your life!” He screamed angrily, he vas a little bit hasty. So she roused her head and looked deep in his eyes. He twinkled because there was a grate hate and anger in those eyes.
“What?” He asked. Then all clear water disappeared from her surface and she stands there just formed from mud.
“You should keep more attention to what you do.” Said a wet scary voice. Then she jumped backwards to the lake and disappeared. Just a muddy spot on the sand of that beach left.
“You will pay your respect to me.” He told to himself and turn. There was the last one to call up for. Not a long way from the lake was a forest. Trees were high and dark. Bushes covered their roots. And it was still growing fast so he could saw lower plants growing higher to reach the upper levels of the forest. Where the firs birds started to sign a love songs.
“Good girl.” He whispered again.
Then he stood in front of the trees and call for Forest.
“Come and raise you the wise.” Forest moved and shivered. Some cracks sounded from the inside of the high, fat tree in front of him. Its body moved and brooked and from the hole in it the dark person step out. Forest was covered by leaves and tree skin. He was over groove by grass of all kind. Flowers were turning their blossoms to the sun from his shoulders.
“I will care about all things that grow, from your ground. The forest and plains will be under my command as you want.” He said with lot of creaking, wrinkling and shivering.
“Thanks brother.”
So it was done he woke them all. Forest walked back and disappeared midst the trees.
Hill turned back and gazed around the world. There was Nature underneath this glob. There were some creatures around her. Some winged others with four or six legs. And Wind just flow next to him singing some song of his own. Followed by some bird-like creatures. Hill smiled and looked down to the lake, where he was talking to Water before. Its level was unstable, full of waves. And water was dark. Not like it should be. Smile disappeared from his face, and shadow of worries replaced it. He shook his head and started walking down the hill to talk to Nature. There was another problem on his mind. When he reached her, she was just giving a live to some new specie. On the ground in front of her the small ball of energy was spinning. It was full of all colors shining with thousands little lights. It rose and extended to some shape of creature. There on one end the head appeared and some limbs from below just spring down to the ground. Nature was forming it by waving her hands around it. Her eyes were closed and sweat purred down her cheeks. And than comes a flesh and the huge animal stud there. Body cowered by long brown hair. Standing on its high strong legs, it turned its head to the nature an bow it. As it done that, the hill smiled.
“Wait…” He said to that creature. It froze on that place looking at him carefully.
“As I see you pay your respect to your creator I’ll gave you a mind able to notify your mortality and wisdom of gods. Be the first one of your kind.” He closed his eyes for a moment, like he’d been thinking; he briefed in deeply, and opened those eyes looking at the creature. It shook its head like it had some pain in it and looked back at him.
“Thank you mighty one.” It spoke to him. “I will use your gift wisely and carefully. But I don’t know for what purpose you gave them to me. Is there something what I and those who will come after me should do to satisfy you?”
“No there are no tasks for you, just rule this world with reason and in peace.” While they were talking the nature didn’t hesitate and created a female for that creature. It stood next to the first one in humble bow before her creators.
“You’ve done well Nature. I congratulates you, keep up the good work.”
“Thank you my lord.” She answered and bowed her head a bit. ”Go now and breed others” She turned to those newly-borns. “I will name you Gous.” She finished. Hill turned back and walked slowly back to there he was borne.
